Minor edits

site/03-todo.md

@@ -1,20 +1,15 @@
 # TODO
 - CIFS/LAN OS guides (screens)
-- Add / verify ALL links in the **UI** go to the right place in docs
 - Fontawesome - Tor box (connecting) needs icon - device guides need OS icons
-- Initial Setup
+- Initial Setup Video
 - Lightning Guides (Zeus)
 - Vaultwarden guide (screens)
 - Refactor and update Roadmap
-
-# BLOCKED:
-- Possible sounds in troubleshooting (and overview / update migrate with links)
-- Alt Market Build Guide
+- BLOCKED: Possible sounds in troubleshooting (and link in overview / upgrade pages)
 
 # AFTER PUBLISHING:
-- Close all relevant issues (some await new processes in order to test)
-- Add new video content
+- Add any new video content
 - Breakout Bitcoin / Lightning integrations into their own individual pages
 - Create badges for device guide topic boxes <connectivity, performance, resilience and/or tuning>
-- Connecting LAN/Tor nesting isn't great
 - Migrate from other server projects / nodes (currently punted)
+- Alt Market Build Guide (punted)

site/source/user-manual/alt-marketplaces.rst

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 Alt Marketplaces
 ================
 
-It is critical to Start9's mission that Start9 does **not** be a central point of failure. The Marketplace is a critical piece of infrastructure and therefore EmbassyOS supports accessing alternative marketplaces.
+It is critical to Start9's mission that Start9 is **not** a central point of failure. The Marketplace is a critical piece of infrastructure and therefore EmbassyOS supports accessing alternative marketplaces.
 
 .. caution:: Start9 is not responsible for issues encountered when downloading services from alternative marketplaces, and cannot provide support for services that are not from our official marketplace. Here be dragons!!
 

site/source/user-manual/customize.rst

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Name Your Device
 Reorder Services
 ----------------
 
-#. In the "Services" tab, and click "Reorder" in the top right.
+#. In the "Services" tab, click "Reorder" in the top right.
 
     .. figure:: /_static/images/walkthrough/reorder0.png
       :width: 60%

site/source/user-manual/dashboard-overview.rst

@@ -21,30 +21,30 @@ Use this tab to customize and manage your Embassy.
         :width: 60%
 
 Backups
-........
+=======
 
 The Backups section allows you to create and restore :ref:`Embassy backups <backups>`.
 
 Settings
-........
+========
 
 The Settings section gives you access to :ref:`EmbassyOS Updates <updating-eos>`, Device Preferences, :ref:`connecting-lan`, :ref:`ssh`, :ref:`wifi`, and :ref:`alt-marketplaces`.
 
 Insights
-........
+========
 
 The Insights section gives you basic information on your Embassy, monitoring of system resources / temperature, and logs for debugging.
 
 Support
-.......
+=======
 
 The Support section provides links to frequently asked questions as well as Start9 and community contact information.
 
 Power
-.....
+=====
 
 * **Restart**
-  
+
     * Be patient while services shut down. A *tune* will play, indicating the shutdown is complete.
     * A gentle *bep* will sound when the Embassy is powered back on.
     * A *chime* will sound when the Embassy is ready to use.  Please be patient as a Restart will take some time.

site/source/user-manual/wifi.rst

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 Setting up WiFi
 ===============
 
-Although a wired (ethernet) connection for best performance, you can connect your Embassy with a wireless connection if you prefer. Follow the directions below to add one or more WiFi networks to you Embassy.
+Although a wired (ethernet) connection is recommended for best performance, you can connect your Embassy with a wireless connection if you prefer. Follow the directions below to add one or more WiFi networks to you Embassy.
 
 #. Go to *Embassy > WiFi*.
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Although a wired (ethernet) connection for best performance, you can connect you
     :width: 60%
     :alt: Enter Credentials
 
-#. If you clicked "Save for Later", the network it will appear in the list, unconnected. If you selected "Save and Connect", the network will attempt to connect and show a green checkmark upon success.
+#. If you clicked "Save for Later", the network will appear in the list, unconnected. If you selected "Save and Connect", the network will attempt to connect and show a green checkmark upon success.
 
    .. figure:: /_static/images/config/wifi4.png
     :width: 60%