From 831cf199af31dedd58d35d31368f4418e7e6b58a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: kn0wmad Date: Wed, 23 Feb 2022 17:27:41 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Minor edits --- site/03-todo.md | 13 ++++--------- site/source/user-manual/alt-marketplaces.rst | 2 +- site/source/user-manual/customize.rst | 2 +- site/source/user-manual/dashboard-overview.rst | 12 ++++++------ site/source/user-manual/wifi.rst | 4 ++-- sphinx-scylladb-theme | 2 +- 6 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/site/03-todo.md b/site/03-todo.md index d8453fc..917a4e7 100644 --- a/site/03-todo.md +++ b/site/03-todo.md @@ -1,20 +1,15 @@ # TODO - CIFS/LAN OS guides (screens) -- Add / verify ALL links in the **UI** go to the right place in docs - Fontawesome - Tor box (connecting) needs icon - device guides need OS icons -- Initial Setup +- Initial Setup Video - Lightning Guides (Zeus) - Vaultwarden guide (screens) - Refactor and update Roadmap - -# BLOCKED: -- Possible sounds in troubleshooting (and overview / update migrate with links) -- Alt Market Build Guide +- BLOCKED: Possible sounds in troubleshooting (and link in overview / upgrade pages) # AFTER PUBLISHING: -- Close all relevant issues (some await new processes in order to test) -- Add new video content +- Add any new video content - Breakout Bitcoin / Lightning integrations into their own individual pages - Create badges for device guide topic boxes -- Connecting LAN/Tor nesting isn't great - Migrate from other server projects / nodes (currently punted) +- Alt Market Build Guide (punted) diff --git a/site/source/user-manual/alt-marketplaces.rst b/site/source/user-manual/alt-marketplaces.rst index cacf9d7..0262ba9 100644 --- a/site/source/user-manual/alt-marketplaces.rst +++ b/site/source/user-manual/alt-marketplaces.rst @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Alt Marketplaces ================ -It is critical to Start9's mission that Start9 does **not** be a central point of failure. The Marketplace is a critical piece of infrastructure and therefore EmbassyOS supports accessing alternative marketplaces. +It is critical to Start9's mission that Start9 is **not** a central point of failure. The Marketplace is a critical piece of infrastructure and therefore EmbassyOS supports accessing alternative marketplaces. .. caution:: Start9 is not responsible for issues encountered when downloading services from alternative marketplaces, and cannot provide support for services that are not from our official marketplace. Here be dragons!! diff --git a/site/source/user-manual/customize.rst b/site/source/user-manual/customize.rst index d58e8a3..27728b2 100644 --- a/site/source/user-manual/customize.rst +++ b/site/source/user-manual/customize.rst @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Name Your Device Reorder Services ---------------- -#. In the "Services" tab, and click "Reorder" in the top right. +#. In the "Services" tab, click "Reorder" in the top right. .. figure:: /_static/images/walkthrough/reorder0.png :width: 60% diff --git a/site/source/user-manual/dashboard-overview.rst b/site/source/user-manual/dashboard-overview.rst index bff0f34..e12c8b1 100644 --- a/site/source/user-manual/dashboard-overview.rst +++ b/site/source/user-manual/dashboard-overview.rst @@ -21,30 +21,30 @@ Use this tab to customize and manage your Embassy. :width: 60% Backups -........ +======= The Backups section allows you to create and restore :ref:`Embassy backups `. Settings -........ +======== The Settings section gives you access to :ref:`EmbassyOS Updates `, Device Preferences, :ref:`connecting-lan`, :ref:`ssh`, :ref:`wifi`, and :ref:`alt-marketplaces`. Insights -........ +======== The Insights section gives you basic information on your Embassy, monitoring of system resources / temperature, and logs for debugging. Support -....... +======= The Support section provides links to frequently asked questions as well as Start9 and community contact information. Power -..... +===== * **Restart** - + * Be patient while services shut down. A *tune* will play, indicating the shutdown is complete. * A gentle *bep* will sound when the Embassy is powered back on. * A *chime* will sound when the Embassy is ready to use. Please be patient as a Restart will take some time. diff --git a/site/source/user-manual/wifi.rst b/site/source/user-manual/wifi.rst index aaac6cb..8c25c05 100644 --- a/site/source/user-manual/wifi.rst +++ b/site/source/user-manual/wifi.rst @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Setting up WiFi =============== -Although a wired (ethernet) connection for best performance, you can connect your Embassy with a wireless connection if you prefer. Follow the directions below to add one or more WiFi networks to you Embassy. +Although a wired (ethernet) connection is recommended for best performance, you can connect your Embassy with a wireless connection if you prefer. Follow the directions below to add one or more WiFi networks to you Embassy. #. Go to *Embassy > WiFi*. @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Although a wired (ethernet) connection for best performance, you can connect you :width: 60% :alt: Enter Credentials -#. If you clicked "Save for Later", the network it will appear in the list, unconnected. If you selected "Save and Connect", the network will attempt to connect and show a green checkmark upon success. +#. If you clicked "Save for Later", the network will appear in the list, unconnected. If you selected "Save and Connect", the network will attempt to connect and show a green checkmark upon success. .. figure:: /_static/images/config/wifi4.png :width: 60% diff --git a/sphinx-scylladb-theme b/sphinx-scylladb-theme index 91c190c..062eaab 160000 --- a/sphinx-scylladb-theme +++ b/sphinx-scylladb-theme @@ -1 +1 @@ -Subproject commit 91c190c7991738a632da94e88a88bcfdb093f6e3 +Subproject commit 062eaabc57a6743006d3d6e3f4043abff13b66e6