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Getting Started - Initial Setup
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A self-hosting experience with StartOS begins with setting up your server for the first time or by wiping an existing server to completely start over. For both of these, choose `Start Fresh`. To transfer existing server data to a new machine or disk or to perform a disaster recovery from backups, choose `Recovery or Restore`.
A self-hosting experience with StartOS begins with setting up your server for the first time or by wiping an existing server to completely start over. For both of these options, choose `Start Fresh`. To transfer existing server data to a new machine or a new disk, or to perform a disaster recovery from backups, choose `Recovery Options`.
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Recovery or Restore
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Recovery Options
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Setting up a new server
Set up a new server
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The video below demonstrations how to set up a newly purchased Start9 server. If you are familar with the process or you have recently :ref:`flashed <_flashing>` an existing server, you may want to skip the video and scroll down straight to Step 1.
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#. Flash your device with a fresh install of StartOS by following the :ref:`flashing guides <flashing>`, making sure to select `Factory Reset` when booting from external media.
#. After install is complete, you will be prompted to remove your external and restart.
.. note:: On a Raspberry Pi you will simply flash the microSD card and reinsert it, connect to power and skip to step 3.
.. figure:: /_static/images/flashing/factory-reset.png
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#. After install is complete, you will be prompted to remove your externally connected USB drive you used with Balena Etcher and restart.
.. note:: On a Raspberry Pi, you will `not` remove the microSD card you have flashed, it will remain in the device.
#. From a client device (desktop/laptop/phone) connected to the same local network as your server, open a browser and visit ``http://start.local``.