Rebase various language, image and instructinos changes PRs (#477)

* Rebase various language, image and instructinos changes PRs

* Update site/source/user-manual/ssh.rst

Co-authored-by: kn0wmad <39687477+kn0wmad@users.noreply.github.com>

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Co-authored-by: kn0wmad <39687477+kn0wmad@users.noreply.github.com>

site/source/getting-started/initial-setup.rst

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ If you are experiencing issues with setup, try the following:
     - Mullvad - Go to "Settings -> VPN Settings -> Local Network Sharing"
     - ProtonVPN - Go to "Preferences -> Connection -> Allow LAN Connections"
 
-#. Visit or refresh (ctrl+shift+R - Linux/Windows, cmd+shift+R - Mac) the start.local page in a web browser
+#. Visit or refresh (ctrl+shift+R on Linux/Windows, cmd+shift+R on macOS Firefox, cmd+option+E then cmd+R on macOS Safari) the start.local page in a web browser
 #. To avoid networking issues, it is recommended to use your `primary` router, not an extender or mesh router
 #. Very rarely, your firewall settings may block mDNS. In this case:
 

site/source/guides/device-guides/linux/ff-linux.rst

@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ Tor
 
 #. Check the box labeled ``Proxy DNS when using SOCKS v5``:
 
-    .. figure:: /_static/images/tor/firefox_proxy.png
+    .. figure:: /_static/images/tor/firefox_proxy_linux.png
         :width: 60%
         :alt: Firefox proxy settings screenshot
 

site/source/guides/device-guides/windows/backup-windows.rst

@@ -8,11 +8,6 @@ Windows Network Folder
   :depth: 2 
   :local:
 
-Check out the video below, and follow along with the steps in this guide to setup a Network Folder on your Windows machine (or attached drive), such that you may create encrypted, private backups of all your StartOS data.
-
-   .. youtube:: wqbXRjttJQY 
-      :width: 100%
-
 Setup Network Folder
 --------------------
 
@@ -38,12 +33,12 @@ Setup Network Folder
 
     .. note::
 
-        If you get the following dialogue box, you have designated your network "Public."  You may wish to change to "Private" if this is your home network.  Otherwise you may turn on network sharing for public networks.
+        If you get the following dialog box, you have designated your network "Public."  You may wish to change to "Private" if this is your home network.  Otherwise you may turn on network sharing for public networks.
 
             .. figure:: /_static/images/cifs/cifs-win4.png
                 :width: 60%
 
-#. Note the share's name, "SharedFolder" displayed in black text in the example screenshot below, above the long hostname and Windows directory path in grey text, both highlighted in blue.  We will take the share's name and enter it in the final step below.
+#. Note the Windows directory path in grey text, highlighted in blue, beginning at the first single slash (``\``).  We will take that share path and enter it as the "Path" in the final step below.
 
     .. figure:: /_static/images/cifs/cifs-win5.png
         :width: 60%

site/source/user-manual/ssh.rst

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Using SSH
 =========
 Like most Linux distributions, you can go "under-the-hood" via SSH (Secure Shell Protocol) if you choose.  It's a good idea to have set up, but generally, all server access is recommended via the UI.  If you are auditing, doing dev work, hacking (with an understanding of the consequences), or are directed to by a Start9 support tech, then you may need SSH access.
 
-For security reasons, password access is not available in most situations, so you will need to add an SSH key to your server via the method below.
+For security reasons, password access is not available, so you will need to add an SSH key to your server via the method below.
 
 .. contents::
   :depth: 2
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Creating an SSH Key
 
 #. Create a strong passphrase and save it somewhere safe, or press ``Enter`` for no passphrase
 
-  .. note:: The next 3 steps only apply to Linux and macOS.  If you are on Windows, please skip down to :ref:`Registering an SSH Key<registering-an-ssh-key>`.
+    .. note:: The next 3 steps only apply to Linux and macOS.  If you are on Windows, please skip down to :ref:`Registering an SSH Key<registering-an-ssh-key>`.
 
 #. It will inform you that your public key has been saved.  Take note of this path:
 
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ Setup
 
         .. code-block:: bash
 
-            echo "HiddenServiceDir /var/lib/tor/ssh" >> /etc/tor/torrc && echo "HiddenServicePort 22 127.0.0.1:22" >> /etc/tor/torrc
+            echo -e "\nHiddenServiceDir /var/lib/tor/ssh\nHiddenServicePort 22 127.0.0.1:22" >> /etc/tor/torrc
 
 #. Restart your Start9 server by exiting chroot edit mode:
 
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Setup
 
     .. code-block:: bash
 
-        cat /var/lib/tor/ssh/hostname
+        sudo cat /var/lib/tor/ssh/hostname
 
 .. note:: Your newly generated .onion address is unique for SSH access only and should not be confused with the main .onion address for the server.
 
@@ -181,13 +181,12 @@ Configure local SSH client
 
     .. code-block:: bash
 
-        echo -e "Host *.onion\n  ProxyCommand nc -xlocalhost:9050 %h %p\n" >> ~/.ssh/config
+        echo -e "\nHost *.onion\n\tProxyCommand nc -xlocalhost:9050 %h %p" >> ~/.ssh/config
 
     This command adds a wildcard setting for .onion domains to your SSH config file. Any .onion domains you connect to using SSH will use the specified proxy command.
 
     Note: You only need to run this command only once to set up the SSH Over Tor configuration.
 
-
 Access
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