- changed 'to' to 'on' (grammar)
- removed 'platform' (doesn't sound natural in 2022 english)
- added `cd embassy-os` because the user is still in root
- i had to close and open the terminal window at this point because `cargo`, which i had installed in the previous step, was not yet in the PATH
- might want to consider one-lining this block of commands? not sure if there's value in keeping them separate
- something like `git clone https://github.com/Start9Labs/embassy-os.git | ./embassy-os/backend/install-sdk.sh` i think?
- under the EmbassyOS section, can you clarify something? is the "running instance" that you refer to the embassy-sdk that we just installed, or is it the instance running on the Embassy device?
