typos and mobile stlying

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Lucy Cifferello
2020-10-08 12:22:27 -06:00
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``Embassy ---> About``
This page conatins static information about your device, such as its ID, Tor Address, and hardware specs.
This page contains static information about your device, such as its ID, Tor Address, and hardware specs.

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Embassy OS supports accessing alternative marketplaces by configuring a system file.
Start9 Labs is not responsible for issues encountered by downloading unverified services from these alternative marketplaces.
After SSHing into the Embassy, run the following commands::
After SSH-ing into the Embassy, run the following commands::
sudo systemctl stop agent
sudo sh -c "echo '<alternative_marketplace_url>' > /root/agent/alt_registry_url.txt"

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#. ``Embassy ---> Restart ---> 'Restart'``.
#. Be patient while services shut down. A *tune* will play, indicating the powerdown is complete.
#. Be patient while services shut down. A *tune* will play, indicating the shutdown is complete.
#. A gentle *bep* will sound when the Embassy is powered back on.
#. A *chime* will sound when the Embassy is ready to use.
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Shutdown
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#. ``Embassy ---> Shutdown ---> 'Shutdown'``
#. Be patient while services shut down. A *tune* will play, indicating the powerdown is complete.
#. Be patient while services shut down. A *tune* will play, indicating the shutdown is complete.
#. It is now safe to unplug the Embassy from power and the ethernet cable, if connected.
.. note:: After a shutdown, the *only* way to turn your Embassy back on is to unplug it and plug it back in. As such, we do not recommend shutting down your Embassy when you are not physically near it. Instead, you should use the restart option.

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``Embassy ---> Check for Updates``
#. If there is an update available, you will be promted to install it.
#. While updating, your Embassy will emit a gantle chime every 20 seconds.
#. If there is an update available, you will be prompted to install it.
#. While updating, your Embassy will emit a gentle chime every 20 seconds.
.. note:: Ensure you have a stable Internet connection, and do not unplug your Embassy during an update. Updates usually complete within a few minutes, but depending on the size of the update and you Internet bandwidth, they can sometimes take up to an hour.

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Add WiFi Network options
#. Save
* Clicking *Add* will save the network credentials but not try to connect immediately. This is useful, for example, if you are conncted over Ethernet at home and want to add your office WiFi credentials.
* Clicking *Add* will save the network credentials but not try to connect immediately. This is useful, for example, if you are connected over Ethernet at home and want to add your office WiFi credentials.
* `Add and Connect`.
#. The saved network will appear in the list when successfully added. If you are successfully connected, the WiFi symbol will be green, at which point, you can safely disconnect the Embassy from your router.

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To add a new service, find it's listing inside the Service Marketplace: ``Marketplace ---> [Service Name] ---> Install``.
Depending on the size of the service and your Internet connection, installation shoud take between 60 seconds and a few minutes.
Depending on the size of the service and your Internet connection, installation should take between 60 seconds and a few minutes.
After installtion, you can view the service's instructions by navigating to ``Services ---> [Service Name] ---> Instructions``
After installation, you can view the service's instructions by navigating to ``Services ---> [Service Name] ---> Instructions``
.. note:: You can only start and use a service once its dependencies are met, its :ref:`configuration<service-config>` complete, and is in a *running* state.

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``Services ---> [Service Name] ---> Logs``
Every service emits logs while it is in a *running* state. Logs give an *under-the-hood* glimpse of a service and can be extremeley useful for debugging purposes. To a non-technical user, logs may look like gibberish, and sometimes there is nothing to see at all.
Every service emits logs while it is in a *running* state. Logs give an *under-the-hood* glimpse of a service and can be extremely useful for debugging purposes. To a non-technical user, logs may look like gibberish, and sometimes there is nothing to see at all.

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.. _managing dependencies:
.. _managing-dependencies:
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Managing Dependencies

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Traditionally, configuring services was a massive headache and a huge barrier to running a personal server. But no more! The Embassy's revolutionary service config system makes the process transparent, simple, and safe.
Config options are defined by the service developer and can be alomst anything. They are represented as simple UI elements - such as toggles and drop downs - and they include explanations and validations, such that users understand their purpose and are prevented from making mistakes.
Config options are defined by the service developer and can be almost anything. They are represented as simple UI elements - such as toggles and drop downs - and they include explanations and validations, such that users understand their purpose and are prevented from making mistakes.