typos and mobile stlying

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Lucy Cifferello
2020-10-08 12:22:27 -06:00
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Connecting
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With the :ref:`initial-setup` complete, your Embassy is now privately hosted on the Internet and can be accessed right from the borwser. Your Embassy's addresses (its Tor and LAN URLs) are completely private; no one else even knows they exists.
With the :ref:`initial-setup` complete, your Embassy is now privately hosted on the Internet and can be accessed right from the browsers. Your Embassy's addresses (its Tor and LAN URLs) are completely private; no one else even knows they exists.
If you accidentally leak your Embassy's addresses, do not worry. You Embassy is also protected by your password; so only you can log in.
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Tor
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Connecting to your Embassy over :ref:`tor` requires uing a browser that supports *.onion* URLs.
Connecting to your Embassy over :ref:`tor` requires using a browser that supports *.onion* URLs.
Currently, Tor is the default and our recommended approach for most users. It *just works*. The one drawback, however, is latency; onion-routed communications over Tor can be slow. For a lightning fast experience, you can connect to your Embassy over LAN (below), but this requires additional setup.
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LAN
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Connecting to your Embassy over :ref:`lan` has the benefit of being fast! It requires uing a browser that supports *.local* URLs, which is true for most browsers.
Connecting to your Embassy over :ref:`lan` has the benefit of being fast! It requires using a browser that supports *.local* URLs, which is true for most browsers.
This option is considered *advanced*, since it requires :ref:`installing and trusting your Embassy's Root Certificate Authority SSL<ssl-setup>` on any phone or laptop you use to connect.