diff --git a/source/support/concepts.rst b/source/support/concepts.rst index 79105c8..a7e7b3b 100644 --- a/source/support/concepts.rst +++ b/source/support/concepts.rst @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ Your Embassy hosts itself on the LAN and is reachable by visiting its *.local* U SSL === -Visiting websites on the Tor network is slow. We wanted to provide a be \er option to access the Embassy at home. That’s why we created an address for the Embassy that can be accessed on your Local Area Network. +Visiting websites on the Tor network is slow. We wanted to provide a better option to access the Embassy at home. That’s why we created an address for the Embassy that can be accessed on your Local Area Network. By default, this `.local` address is served like a regular website, over HTTP. Browser's makes it noticeable visiting a site over HTTP in the URL bar - it could be red, show an unlocked lock, or warn the connection is not secure. @@ -88,4 +88,4 @@ If a malicious third party were to intercept a request, they would see a garbled When you use Tor to communicate with services running on the Embassy, all the traffic is onion routed and encrypted, and there are no Tor exit nodes involved - it's totally private with no configuration needed. -Furthermore, every service on the Embassy has a different Tor address, including the device itself. This is for privacy reasons - should one Tor address be exposed, the others will not be compromised. Tor addresses are actually ed25519 keys, which means they also provide all the benefits of cryptographically secure private/public keys. \ No newline at end of file +Furthermore, every service on the Embassy has a different Tor address, including the device itself. This is for privacy reasons - should one Tor address be exposed, the others will not be compromised. Tor addresses are actually ed25519 keys, which means they also provide all the benefits of cryptographically secure private/public keys. diff --git a/source/user-manual/connecting.rst b/source/user-manual/connecting.rst index 2307e02..6da5eab 100644 --- a/source/user-manual/connecting.rst +++ b/source/user-manual/connecting.rst @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Connecting ********** -With the :ref:`initial-setup` complete, your Embassy is now privately hosted on the Internet and can be accessed right from the browsers. Your Embassy's addresses (its Tor and LAN URLs) are completely private; no one else even knows they exists. +With the :ref:`initial-setup` complete, your Embassy is now privately hosted on the Internet and can be accessed right from a web browser. Your Embassy's addresses (its Tor and LAN URLs) are completely private; no one else even knows they exist. If you accidentally leak your Embassy's addresses, do not worry. You Embassy is also protected by your password; so only you can log in. @@ -37,4 +37,4 @@ LAN Connecting to your Embassy over :ref:`lan` has the benefit of being fast! It requires that your are connected to your home network and using a browser that supports *.local* URLs, which is true for most browsers. -.. seealso:: :ref:`Installing and trusting your Embassy's Root Certificate Authority SSL` \ No newline at end of file +.. seealso:: :ref:`Installing and trusting your Embassy's Root Certificate Authority SSL` diff --git a/source/user-manual/general/embassy-config.rst b/source/user-manual/general/embassy-config.rst index ed0d76e..7cd56ce 100644 --- a/source/user-manual/general/embassy-config.rst +++ b/source/user-manual/general/embassy-config.rst @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Config Options ************** -Click "Config". Here you can set custom configurations for your Embassy. Currently, changing the Device Name is the only option. +Click "Config". Here you can set custom configurations for your Embassy. Currently, you can change the "Device Name" and enable/disable "Auto Check for Updates." .. figure:: /_static/images/embassy_config.png :width: 90% diff --git a/source/user-manual/managing-services/index.rst b/source/user-manual/managing-services/index.rst index 3ad560a..3227cf3 100644 --- a/source/user-manual/managing-services/index.rst +++ b/source/user-manual/managing-services/index.rst @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Managing Services ***************** -Services are self-hosted, open source projects made compatible for EmbassyOS. Each service is has been independently developed by members of the open source community. The Embassy enables configuration, customization and a one click install. +Services are self-hosted, open source projects made compatible for EmbassyOS. Each service has been independently developed by members of the open source community. The Embassy enables configuration, customization and a one click install. .. note:: Some services require configuration before starting up. You can only connect to and use a service once it is in a *running* state. @@ -15,4 +15,4 @@ Services are self-hosted, open source projects made compatible for EmbassyOS. Ea service-config properties logs - managing-deps \ No newline at end of file + managing-deps