From 4c49888b0a3f0dcf4e77dae06df12c753280aee9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: gStart9 Date: Fri, 27 Oct 2023 09:25:51 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] Clear up instructions on 0344 --- .../guides/device-guides/dg-linux/lan-linux.rst | 16 +++++++++------- .../guides/device-guides/dg-mac/tor-mac.rst | 2 +- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-linux/lan-linux.rst b/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-linux/lan-linux.rst index 8966b34..995d8c2 100644 --- a/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-linux/lan-linux.rst +++ b/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-linux/lan-linux.rst @@ -34,15 +34,15 @@ Trust Root CA sudo apt update sudo apt install -y ca-certificates p11-kit - #. Move into the folder where you downloaded your Start9 server's Root CA (usually ``~/Downloads``), and run the following commands to add your Start9 server's CA certificate to the OS trust store: + #. Change directory into the folder where you downloaded your StartOS server's Root CA (usually ``~/Downloads``), and run the following commands to add your Start9 server's CA certificate to the OS trust store: - .. caution:: BE CERTAIN to replace ``adjective-noun`` with your server's unique hostname in the 3rd and 4th commands below! + .. caution:: Be careful to replace ``adjective-noun`` with your server's unique hostname in the 3rd and 4th commands below! .. code-block:: bash cd ~/Downloads sudo mkdir -p /usr/share/ca-certificates/start9 - sudo cp "adjective-noun.local.crt" /usr/share/ca-certificates/start9/ + sudo cp adjective-noun.local.crt /usr/share/ca-certificates/start9/ sudo bash -c "echo 'start9/adjective-noun.local.crt' >> /etc/ca-certificates.conf" sudo update-ca-certificates @@ -50,12 +50,13 @@ Trust Root CA .. group-tab:: Arch/Garuda - From the folder you have downloaded your Start9 server's Root CA, run the following commands (if you have changed the certificate's filename, be sure to change it here): + Change directory to the folder where you downloaded your StartOS server's Root CA, and run the following commands, being careful to replace ``adjective-noun`` with your server's unique hostname in the 3rd command below: .. code-block:: bash + cd ~/Downloads sudo pacman -S ca-certificates - sudo cp ".crt" /etc/ca-certificates/trust-source/anchors/ + sudo cp adjective-noun.local.crt /etc/ca-certificates/trust-source/anchors/ sudo update-ca-trust Despite no output from the last command, you can test your app right away. @@ -72,12 +73,13 @@ Trust Root CA Trust your server's CA certificate: - From the folder you have downloaded your Start9 server's Root CA, run the following commands (if you have changed the certificate's filename, be sure to change it here): + Change directory to the folder where you downloaded your StartOS server's Root CA, and run the following commands, being careful to replace ``adjective-noun`` with your server's unique hostname in the 3rd command below: .. code-block:: bash + cd ~/Downloads sudo yum install ca-certificates - sudo cp ".crt" /etc/pki/ca-trust/source/anchors/ + sudo cp adjective-noun.local.crt /etc/pki/ca-trust/source/anchors/ sudo update-ca-trust You're now ready to browse your service UIs with encryption, either via the browser, or with native client apps. For Mozilla apps, such as Firefox, you will need to follow the :ref:`Firefox Config ` guide, which we highly recommend. diff --git a/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-mac/tor-mac.rst b/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-mac/tor-mac.rst index 858a873..c943d0a 100644 --- a/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-mac/tor-mac.rst +++ b/site/source/guides/device-guides/dg-mac/tor-mac.rst @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Install Homebrew Wait a few minutes while it downloads and installs what it needs. -.. note:: Once installation is complete you will need to add "brew" to your path. There will be instructions on how to do this with the specific commands you need to enter if you scroll up a little in your terminal. Look for "Add homebrew to your path". Enter the commands and then type **brew --version** to ensure that brew is working. If you see something like **"Homebrew 3.6.18"** then it is installed. If you see **"zsh: command not found: brew"** then it either hasn't installed correctly, has not been added to your path yet or you simply need to open a new terminal. (If you do try restarting terminal, make a note of the commands suggested in case you need them again). + Once installation is complete, close the Terminal. .. warning:: Surprisingly, Homebrew uses Google Analytics to collect anonymous usage data. You can deselect the option to share usage data by `opting out `_.