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-Start9 is committed to ensuring that embassyOS is accessible.  It will always be possible to build a comprable device to those sold in the `Start9 Store <https://store.start9.com>`_.  You can use the following guide to build your own Embassy with readily available hardware.  If you need help or want to share your experience, please `head to our forums <https://community.start9.com/>`_.  Want to support Sovereign Computing?  Please consider a `donation to Start9 <https://btcpay.start9.com/apps/2Et1JUmJnDwzKncfVBXvspeXiFsa/crowdfund>`_.
+Start9 is committed to ensuring that embassyOS is accessible. This guide is to install embassyOS on most x86 platforms.  Start9's x86-based Embassy Pro is available for purchase on the `Start9 Store <https://store.start9.com/products/embassy-pro>`_.
 
+For help with this guide or to share your experience with other, please `head to our community forum <https://community.start9.com/>`_.  Want to support Sovereign Computing?  Please consider a `donation to Start9 <https://btcpay.start9.com/apps/2Et1JUmJnDwzKncfVBXvspeXiFsa/crowdfund>`_.
 
 Hardware
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 Minimum OS Requirements
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+The specs below would be acceptable for an Embassy running minimal services with minimal storage needs
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 - Single vCPU Core 2Ghz
 - 4GB RAM
 - 64GB Storage
 
 Recommended OS Requirements
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+If you intend to run Bitcoin or store any meaningful amount of data, you will need
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 - Quad-Core CPU 2.5Ghz+
 - 8GB+ RAM
 - 1TB+ Storage